Please space after punctuation. It's messy to leave pages unspaced visually.
Please, and I can't stress this any more, don't plagiarize. I used to have a tendency to do so, and everyone here has as well, so I don't blame you for the habit. However, as we're moving away from the trend, I will highly enforce no plagiarism. Instead of copying entire chunks of text from other wikis or Wikipedia, and then deleting words to make it fit the roleplay, you should summarize (sum up the important ideas, not copying any details or text) or paraphrase (don't leave any details out, but put them in your own words.) It'll take a while to get used to, but you can do it.
Don't use Template:Infobox! Use Template:Character. It's a lot simpler and user-friendly. Template:Infobox should be for broader Advanced Techniques or weapons.